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Between a Rock and a Dying Place

She’s caught between a rock and a dying place, where alternatives and choices are equally grim. Ignore, and bend backwards to save some face, or confront, and rip band-aids, and risk losing him? Her heart shrinks from either, is loath to proceed, both beasts in chest’s cavity snarl to be heard; to step out and…

She’s caught between a rock and a dying place,

where alternatives and choices are equally grim.

Ignore, and bend backwards to save some face,

or confront, and rip band-aids, and risk losing him?

Her heart shrinks from either, is loath to proceed,

both beasts in chest’s cavity snarl to be heard;

to step out and risk is to make her soul bleed,

but  to not act will curse self, condemn hope deferred.

Responses to “Between a Rock and a Dying Place”

  1. cythereandreams

    Funny, I was just thinking of writing about my own experience of being in this same place, four years ago. You’re reading my mind…

    1. melodylowes

      Wow – I’m better than I thought! 🙂

  2. spool2spool

    These images are getting stronger and stronger.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you!

  3. Debbie

    This kind of goes with the Dare poem! Thanks Melody!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you Debbie!

  4. godspoetbychoice

    Love the raw intensity and honest emotion in this poem.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you… Life comes with so many emotions attached. As writers, we need to be able to express them all in turn, right? 🙂

      1. godspoetbychoice

        Yupp! (red neck reply)

      2. melodylowes

        🙂

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