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Keyhole To Heaven

I stand on childhood’s tiptoes and the oxygen in my lungs is stillborn in its stall as I peer through . the keyhole to heaven; all is angels’ wings and perfume and brightness and I squirm . to reach just a sliver higher. I strain with broken grip and limping spirit and if I shift too much the…

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I stand on childhood’s

tiptoes and the oxygen

in my lungs is stillborn

in its stall as I peer through

.

the keyhole to heaven;

all is angels’ wings

and perfume and

brightness and I squirm

.

to reach just a sliver higher.

I strain with broken grip

and limping spirit and

if I shift too much the

.

vision fades and the scent

eludes, wisp snatched by

wayward breeze. So I

peer through the keyhole

.

and feel the brush of angels

in flight and linger to

catch the smell of home

before I lower myself

.

to my side of the door,

waiting, ever waiting

for someone to turn

the key.

.

Responses to “Keyhole To Heaven”

  1. Caddo-Jael

    I know.

    1. melodylowes

      I know you do. I thought of you actually as I wrote the last lines…

      1. Caddo-Jael

        Thank you so much for thinking of me, Mel–funny, how several of us seem to do that, as we write our individual and personal poetry. I have a poem tomorrow–for you and your friends who are grieving.

      2. melodylowes

        Wow – looking forward to it!

  2. Judy

    So poignantly beautiful. Thank you.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Judy! 🙂

  3. cythereandreams

    Wow. Love the construction on this one.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks! I couldn’t hep but wonder at that shaft of light floating down through the blossoms. a great incentive toward pondering!

  4. Gallivanta

    Lovely.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you!

  5. Stephen Nielsen

    Lovely thoughts. I always look forward to your poetry.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Stephen!!

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