Proof of Purchase

  Her reply blushes, apologetic for existing beyond what her back story projected . (probable destiny – doormat, a yearbook dilemma). From inside those petals, . she can’t possibly appreciate the mystery and fragrance that draws him in, . fly to honey. She checks her nails, boredom masking terror, and another . one bites the…

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Her reply blushes,

apologetic for existing

beyond what her

back story projected

.

(probable destiny –

doormat, a yearbook

dilemma). From

inside those petals,

.

she can’t possibly

appreciate the

mystery and fragrance

that draws him in,

.

fly to honey. She

checks her nails,

boredom masking

terror, and another

.

one bites the dust.

She will add him

to the collection,

proof of purchase.

Responses to “Proof of Purchase”

  1. Gallivanta

    This delicate beauty; a honey trap?

    1. melodylowes

      A bee paradise!!

  2. bennetta faire

    The photo is just beyond beautiful, Mel–if I ever get my novel done, seems like that would be a beautiful cover photo… I was following the poem, loving it–until the last stanza, where I lost you; so I’m feeling rather dull and dweebish.

    1. melodylowes

      She’s paying the price for her self-protectionist policies – her broken potential relationships are starting to add up. Her need to be safe is requiring her to give up possible happiness. Make sense??

      1. bennetta faire

        Oooh, no wonder I was too blind to see it–that’s exactly what I’ve done…..

      2. melodylowes

        It’s hard to recognize and harder to make the mental shift to create new patterns. Uphill work, for sure!

      3. bennetta faire

        And my cowardly response now, is, “Well, I’m too old for that anymore…” arrgghh

      4. melodylowes

        Never! Think Moses, girl…

      5. bennetta faire

        Well, I dearly love Moses–but I ‘spect he might be gettin’ a little ripe by now…

      6. melodylowes

        Ha! Maybe so – but he was a ripe old age when he started his new career – so what’s good for the gander is good for the goose, right? 🙂

      7. bennetta faire

        Maybe so….

  3. elizabeth

    Oh, a horror poem! LOL 🙂 Very cute.

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Sometimes we need to let the honesty of reality out of the bottle. Life is a messy, wonderful, difficult, amazing process!

  4. Jonathan Caswell

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    WATCH OUT FOR THIS FLOWER, HONEY!!!!!!

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