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Upon an Autumn Afternoon

Summer slowly rusts away in copper-plated sighs; Flowers nod their heavy heads and curtsy their good-byes. Wind discovers secret nests, undressing hidden lairs; Leaves, ashamed, blush scarlet veins, and tiptoe down the stairs.

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Summer slowly rusts away in copper-plated sighs;

Flowers nod their heavy heads and curtsy their good-byes.

Wind discovers secret nests, undressing hidden lairs;

Leaves, ashamed, blush scarlet veins, and tiptoe down the stairs.

Responses to “Upon an Autumn Afternoon”

  1. Sissym

    I wish you happy new week!

    Cheers

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you Sissy! You, too! 😉

  2. Heidi Viars

    what colorful words … tiptoeing down the stairs … I think I can hear them 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Me too! 😉 Thanks Heidi!

  3. Debbie

    I just loved this, Melody!! One of the things I do like about fall is seeing all the bird and squirrel nests when the leaves fall away!

    1. melodylowes

      ME too! Thanks Debbie…

  4. Gallivanta

    Lovely images 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! It helps me to focus on the beautiful things during this season, so I don’t freak out about the winter that comes after it.

      1. Gallivanta

        Hoarding the bright colours like a magpie 🙂

      2. melodylowes

        That’s me! 😀

  5. Rum Punch Drunk

    Oh, the duvet is out on my bed and the heating has reluctantly been switched on as I feel the pinch of winter approaching. Loved how your poem says a fond farewell to autumn who’s played her part.

    1. melodylowes

      WE got our first helping of snow today – and I wasn’t expecting it, so ended up scraping my windows with my health card. When WILL I learn? 🙂

  6. I HAVE A VOICE

    A real apple cider stirred with a Cincinnati stick as a pen! BEAUTIFUL !

    1. melodylowes

      Gorgeous! What a thought!

  7. Symanntha Renn

    You can never have too many Fall poems. I really like this one.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks! I’m finally learning to appreciate this season more.

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