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Around the Next Bend

Hooded, he searches restlessly for the end of the line. He wonders if it will be around the next bend, but after a million curves and a million miles, he has lost count and the odds aren’t stacked in his favour. The journey isn’t what he expected. The curves and twists are dizzying in their complexity.…

Image courtesy of Brian Gaynor Photography

Hooded, he searches restlessly for

the end of the line.

He wonders if it will be around the next bend,

but after a million curves and

a million miles,

he has lost count and

the odds aren’t stacked in his favour.

The journey isn’t what he expected.

The curves and twists are dizzying in their complexity.

He thought he’d be further at this

stage in life.

He thought he’d have gained a conductor’s hat;

instead, the caboose is overloaded with baggage

he can’t even begin to tag.

Hope doesn’t conduct well on rails.

Emptiness washes him out like a hollow horn echoing back

from the trees,

chugging with used and belaboured  ‘I-thought-I-coulds’.

Is he on the right track?

Will he run out of steam?

Maybe, the next bend will clatter with revelation, illumination,

be a station to pull into.

Maybe what he searches for even in his dreams

will be around the next bend…

Responses to “Around the Next Bend”

  1. My Wyoming Adventure

    Very nice! I have been a little busy lately and haven’t had a lot of time to check out what my friends are doing. I had some catching up to do on your site. All your poems are wonderful and I love your photography. Also, congrats on your awards. They are well deserved!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! Isn’t it hard to keep up with things? I’m now ‘following’ so many great blogs, and every week discover more, that I can hardly get to all of them. Hopefully we all give each other some slack in that department!! I appreciate the time you’ve taken on mine – I guess it makes us realize how precious it is when people stop by and take the time to invest in us, right? 🙂

      1. My Wyoming Adventure

        I agree. And thank you for spending time on my blog, too.

      2. melodylowes

        You’re welcome! 🙂

  2. elizabeth

    Briliant! (as we’d say in Scotland) 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! (That’s Canadian! 🙂 )

  3. Herbstbaum

    So wonderful. Thanks!

    1. melodylowes

      I’s so glad you enjoyed it!

  4. pause

    i have just nominated you for the thank you for writing award…you will found it on my blog..congrats..and keep sharing your amazing poets with us..:)

    1. melodylowes

      Wow – thank you! I am honoured.

  5. Brian Gaynor

    Thank you for putting such beautiful words to imagery. You have expressed the essence of my intentions, creating poetic themes of introspection, despair, and angst, sprinkled with the possibility of hope and fulfilled dreams around the next bend. Wonderful work. Thanks for your creation.

    1. melodylowes

      This is my third go – the first two were SO dark. One was ‘Poverty stalks among us’ – they wrote themselves so bleak that I had to come at it from a different angle. I’m glad it expresses what your image intended! It grabbed me emotionally, so that is a strong indication of its power.

  6. ivonprefontaine

    This is an amazing combination. Brian took a great picture and the poet added wonderful words to match. Thank you to both of you!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! I told Brian that all we needed was matching music for the complete poetic experience… 🙂

      1. ivonprefontaine

        We need to find someone to write the score.

      2. melodylowes

        I could if I had the inclination – I have an awesome keyboard with a mixing board and everything. But music has not come back to me in my healing journey. I feel as though the poetry, the words, are the first step back to my music. Maybe one day!

  7. nothingprofound

    Melody, wonderful poem and photo illustrating the theme of alienation and the search for meaning.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Marty! It is such a gripping image to me. I am discovering the delights of a really powerful image in helping us to understand our world better. Dare I say it even makes me ‘happy’? 🙂

  8. Petro Neagu

    It might sound strange but although it inspires sadness, I really love the picture and the poem is simply wonderful.

    xoxo

    1. melodylowes

      I love it too! As soon as I saw it I knew I wanted to write something about it. It is a lot of fun to collaborate like that and use someone else’s images. I find it interesting to know if my words match what they had in mind when they took the photo.

      1. Petro Neagu

        I think you’ve done a great job and I’m sure they would agree. If not, introduce them to me, I have my “tools” to convince them, he he

      2. melodylowes

        I would PAY to see you try! You almost made me choke on my chocolate! 🙂 You are FUNNY!

      3. Petro Neagu

        So you are a chocolate person too. Cool 🙂

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