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Little Cloud of Smoke and Mirrors

Little cloud of smoke and mirrors, How you gloat when shadows fall to earth! You look down your nose as fears of Sunless skies give frantic thoughts new berth. But I can see through your pretense; I know the fabric from which you’re made. You are but a wispy incense; Sun’s optimistic smiles trump your…

Little cloud of smoke and mirrors,

How you gloat when shadows fall to earth!

You look down your nose as fears of

Sunless skies give frantic thoughts new berth.

But I can see through your pretense;

I know the fabric from which you’re made.

You are but a wispy incense;

Sun’s optimistic smiles trump your shade!

Responses to “Little Cloud of Smoke and Mirrors”

  1. munazahgulzar

    concise and beautiful!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you very much!

  2. poetryandmusings

    love it…felt like I was there!! thanks for sharing!!

    1. melodylowes

      How sweet! Thank you so much!

  3. Petro Neagu

    That proves again how talented you are. You took a rather unappealing subject, the clouds, and made a great, intriguing poem 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Why thank you, my dear!

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