Reflections

In your smoky orb I spy Reflections of a broken heart; Pieces of a scattered I, Remnants of an enemy dart. Rainy tears have marked your frame, Rust and imperfections rule; My reflection is the same, I am marred by actions cruel. But if I will closer peer, I can see your beauty still; Yes,…

In your smoky orb I spy

Reflections of a broken heart;

Pieces of a scattered I,

Remnants of an enemy dart.

Rainy tears have marked your frame,

Rust and imperfections rule;

My reflection is the same,

I am marred by actions cruel.

But if I will closer peer,

I can see your beauty still;

Yes, I see the hand of fear,

But, too, I see an iron will.

If in your pock-marked visage lies

Potential greatness here on earth –

I, whose scars are God’s own prize,

See in you my own true worth.

Responses to “Reflections”

  1. Antara

    That is so, so inspiring, I can’t tell you how much I loved that. Beautiful!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you so much! I appreciate that!

  2. ivonprefontaine

    Has it been raining? I noticed the last couple of days raindrops in your pictures and text.

    1. melodylowes

      Yeah – windy, wet, and cool. Blech. But makes for some good photography!

  3. Holly Michael

    Lovely photos and words! Beautiful!!!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you Holly! I enjoyed your ‘cowboy’ post – looked like a lot of fun! 🙂

  4. Symanntha Renn

    This is a really great poem. And these are words I really needed to hear today. Thanks for posting.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you Symanntha! I’m glad that it can be useful for others, too – I need it just as baldy! 🙂

  5. Janene

    Absolutely beautiful, both in words and imagery. Magnificent, Melody!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks, Janene!

  6. Madilyn

    A lovely poem on reflections, Melody, and the photograph is perfect! (Btw, what program do you use to get your name on your photos? Thanks!) 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you Madilyn! I use picmonkey – it is so user friendly, even for an almost computer-illiterate ‘old folk’ like me! 🙂

      1. Madilyn

        Thanks! 🙂

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