Carved

I don’t even remember who carved what first – I just know the rawness of slices on skin; Not realizing that I needn’t accept the curse, I assimilated the marks until they grew within. Each signature pooled in surrounding wound Like rain as it seeks ever the lowest ground; Each epithet sang with a gruesome…

Image courtesy of El Bueno, El Feo y El Malo

I don’t even remember who carved what first –

I just know the rawness of slices on skin;

Not realizing that I needn’t accept the curse,

I assimilated the marks until they grew within.

Each signature pooled in surrounding wound

Like rain as it seeks ever the lowest ground;

Each epithet sang with a gruesome tune

As poison-pen arrows their resting-place found.

My eyes grew dim with perennial tears

And cataracts formed to constrict my view;

The graffiti embodied my nightmared fears

As I learned to adopt them as being my due.

But You had already in compassion deep

Carved out Your mark over all the rest;

You saw the beauty the curse made to sleep,

And Cross covered scars that criss-crossed my chest.

Your wounds smothered mine, in sympathy true,

Love conquered lines that had lied to my face;

Now when I look at my scars, I see You

Whose body was scarred as You died in my place.

Responses to “Carved”

  1. Imelda

    This poem is beautiful, Melody.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks, Imelda!

  2. Herbstbaum

    wonderful!

    1. melodylowes

      Danke! πŸ™‚ (I have to show off my one German word…)

      1. Herbstbaum

        ItΒ΄s a very important word in all languages πŸ™‚

      2. melodylowes

        πŸ™‚

  3. moiracampbell

    In contemplation of “the rawness of slices on skin” lately, I’ve been studying Magdalene. This is a great poem, and a vast-visual to accompany it.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you for your visits, Moira!

  4. Angel

    This brought tears to my eyes. Your words spin such beautiful power here. They feel carving themselves and alive – as I read through, they seemed to hold a breath of their own. I really was moved by this piece. (peace) Great work and image!

    1. melodylowes

      Oh, thank you so much….that means a lot coming from a wordsmith!

  5. Symanntha Renn

    This is a very moving piece. I really like this one.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks! It’s one of my favourites, too!

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