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Mother’s Song

I cannot promise perfect days Or from your circles, constant praise; I cannot banish rainy storms Or pledge that love will keep you warm; To guarantee the stars will shine Steps out of bounds that are not mine – But I can hold you when you grieve, When breakers dash what you believe, And life’s…

I cannot promise perfect days

Or from your circles, constant praise;

I cannot banish rainy storms

Or pledge that love will keep you warm;

To guarantee the stars will shine

Steps out of bounds that are not mine –

But I can hold you when you grieve,

When breakers dash what you believe,

And life’s false grandeur grinds hope down;

I won’t let your sorrow drown

Your vision or your grip on grace  –

My daughter child, there is a place

Inside my soul where you belong,

You draw from me this Mother’s Song…

Responses to “Mother’s Song”

  1. Glenda Mills

    Ah Melody,
    I believe this is my favorite! Write on!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you Glenda! 🙂

  2. greenlightlady

    As a mother of a long awaited daughter this captures how I feel perfectly! I love to hug my daughter when she needs one (plus the ones in between) and she already offers me one when I need it… Love your poem.
    ~ Wendy

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you, Wendy! Having a daughter is a precious gift…

  3. snowbirdpress

    Oh, if it were only possible to pass on our love to our children in a form that could translate the generations disconnect. This lovely and I wish you and your daughter many years of exploring that love.

    1. melodylowes

      Aw, how sweet. Thank you!

  4. Caddo Veil

    Wow, this one choked me up, Melody–so beautiful. God bless you abundantly–love, Caddo

    1. melodylowes

      Hmmm… adding ‘choking’ to my list of accomplishments wasn’t the feather in my cap I was looking for… 🙂

  5. Write, Wrong, and InBetween Reviews

    beautifully written… I am a fellow mother who feels you captured the heart of a mother perfectly. wonderful 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! There is something universally binding about the experience of motherhood, isn’t there?

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