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Mr. W’s Signature

Illustrious, industrious bug – ‘Mr. W’, obscure pupal foe of wood, your signature damns you; literacy condemns your wormy way. In getting under her skin, your art, a permanent addition to Nature’s  Driftwood collection, becomes proof positive of your unfettered appetite. * This ‘writing’ is in truth a wormy guest beneath the living tree’s skin.…

Illustrious, industrious bug –

‘Mr. W’,

obscure pupal foe of wood,

your signature damns you;

literacy condemns your wormy way.

In getting under her skin,

your art, a permanent addition

to Nature’s  Driftwood collection,

becomes proof positive

of your

unfettered appetite.

*

This ‘writing’ is in truth a wormy guest beneath the living tree’s skin.  Don’t you think it looks like ‘Mr. W’?

Responses to “Mr. W’s Signature”

  1. artlesspoems

    haha. Mr. W has indeed put his signature on that driftwood, owning it until some dog steals it with his piss. 😉 Good poem. I like the quirkiness of it.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks! A little imagination goes a long way, right? 🙂

  2. snowbirdpress

    knotty weathered wood
    wrapped in seaweed
    tsunami’s aftermath
    ~~ I understand that the people on the west coast have to watch out for driftwood that might contain invasive species. Although I suspect your Mr. W is a US native after all. Lovely.

    1. melodylowes

      Lovely poem! (And this Mr. W. is definitely a Canadian, eh?) 🙂

  3. Caddo Veil

    I’m glad you added the italicized note, Melody–I was going in a totally wrong direction! And yes, it absolutely looks like a signature: “Mr W”! God bless you Big today–love, sis Caddo

    1. melodylowes

      Curious – what direction were you going?

      1. Caddo Veil

        I was thinking maybe it was a rant against people who carve on logs–like maybe that’s not respectful, or ecological, or something. Making a note not to do it, you know? (I’m very rule-conscientious!)

      2. melodylowes

        🙂 Nope! It’s fun to hear what is in someone’s mind as they read – you never know what interpretation their own life will shade it with, you know? Btw, I’m also a recovering rule-aholic! 🙂

      3. Caddo Veil

        Oh wow, I’m stickin’ with you–you’re an ex-fretter, and now an ex-rule-aholic–any other bad health habits you’ve put to rest? Maybe you need to write a book about that, or a post, or poem. See–I can find all kinds of projects for you (like you have free time)! On a slightly more serious note, I’m curious whether you teach any “simple” poetry to your classes of young ones? Reading, or writing.

      4. melodylowes

        This year I’m not teaching reading or writing – and to be honest I only started writing poetry a few months ago, so no – I haven’t. Thanks for the bug in my ear – I’ll have to see where I can fit it in! 🙂

      5. Caddo Veil

        Seriously?? You only became a poet a few months ago?? That is like UNBELIEVABLE!! Whoa–a prodigy, or somethin’, no? I was already amazed at your work–now I’m (almost) dumbstruck, and falling on the floor in a faint. Well, if you’re not teaching reading and writing, I guess it won’t fit in–but truly, you should consider accepting a “divine mission” to teach “just a little” poetry to young folks. It enriches their lives, and may prime the pump for future greats, like us (ha ha, laughs modestly).

      6. melodylowes

        Yep – only started in May. I’ve written songs, which are glorified poetry, I guess. And the required Remembrance Day pieces for school back in the day. I’m thinking that it was in there and only needed to be broken out… I am just finding my ‘voice’ and it is EXHILERATING!

      7. Caddo Veil

        Yes! And I rejoice for, and with you!!! Songs? Wonderful–so are you musically gifted, as well? I’m thinking I may need to borrow that thought–your poems being inside and “only needed to be broken out”…

      8. melodylowes

        It is a nice thought, isn’t it?

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