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Jet-Stream

Jet-stream, sail into the sunset, fly my dreams to hidden clouds; take these broken pieces with you, bury them in umber shrouds. Soar past bands of razor-memories, slice through liquid gold refined; find a place where happy endings leave the hounds of hell behind.

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Jet-stream, sail into the sunset,

fly my dreams to hidden clouds;

take these broken pieces with you,

bury them in umber shrouds.

Soar past bands of razor-memories,

slice through liquid gold refined;

find a place where happy endings

leave the hounds of hell behind.

Responses to “Jet-Stream”

  1. roughseasinthemed

    Nice imagery – photo and words.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks! 🙂

  2. lvsrao

    Nice picture. Beautiful thought.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you very much!

  3. greenlightlady

    This is glorious to see and read, Melody! Is this the sunset you held your breath to take? It’s a wowser! ( new word ) 😉

    Blessings ~ Wendy

    1. melodylowes

      That’s the very one!

  4. Caddo Veil

    Wow-Wonderful, Melody–indeed! God bless you–love, Caddo

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Caddo!

  5. Debbie

    So beautiful, the photo , and the image of our dreams flying off to a safe place too. Blessings!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Debbie! 🙂

  6. Gallivanta

    So much drama and intensity.

    1. melodylowes

      Inspired by a pretty intense sky! Thank you….

  7. nightlake

    lovely..liked the last two lines the most

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you very much! I’m always so gratified to have readers share their interpretations or reactions – I appreciate your visits!

      1. nightlake

        You are welcome:)

  8. godspoetbychoice

    Great picture awesome poem you just keep getting better. I love so much when I can take a few stolen moments to just enjoy your writing and pictures it is such a treat

    1. melodylowes

      Wow – you honor me. I thank you!

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