, , , , , ,

Drip

Sun on skin, and self drips, drips, drips, cannot grip under such Love. Your gaze melts me, pares me, strips me down and I drip, drip, drip. Impurities slip, molecule rolling over molecule, watering the ground, praying for green…

dripping.jpg

Sun on skin,

and self drips,

drips,

drips,

cannot grip

under such

Love.

Your gaze

melts me,

pares me,

strips me down

and I drip,

drip,

drip.

Impurities

slip,

molecule

rolling over

molecule,

watering the ground,

praying

for

green…

Responses to “Drip”

  1. Chito L. Aguilar

    Hi Melody.
    Thanks for the very thought-provoking image and words.
    Fine imagery and complementation, indeed!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you very much, Chito! 🙂

  2. v4vikey

    Beautiful & nice thought…

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! I appreciate your visits…

  3. Caddo Veil

    Hmmmm, very deep today.

    1. melodylowes

      My brain is plumb tuckered out, Ma’am! 🙂

      1. Caddo Veil

        I ‘spect it is, dear heart–I’m draggin’ too, which is why I could only “hmmmm”…

  4. Debbie

    I loved this one .. the depth of it and the shape of it. Thank you! And without knowing it, you’ve blessed me in a whole other way. Once when I checked to see what people were looking up to find my blog, it said, ‘deb drips’. ! I laughed but didn’t find it particularly encouraging. Now with your poem, it fits! 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Ha ha! Those search terms are sometimes unbelievably weird and wacky, aren’t they??

What are your thoughts?