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Through a Glass Darkly

When you look through my window, what do you see? Does your own reflection distort, distract from my own? Or do those dark eyes perceive my frantic efforts to achieve meaning, see through the fragile skin to bones as stark as grave? Can you see past the crumbs, past the messiness of life in the living,…

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When you look through my window, what do you see?

Does your own reflection distort,

distract from my own?

Or do those dark eyes

perceive my frantic efforts to achieve meaning,

see through the fragile skin

to bones as stark as grave?

Can you see past the crumbs,

past the messiness of life in the living,

to the heart beating love

and fear

and sons and daughters,

meetings and givings,

turmoil and rest?

And I wonder –

Have you mastered

the mystery of your own survival,

do you know where

hope hides

when the discomfort of the stretch

comes?

Can you tell tales

to keep nightmares away

during unending Arabian nights?

Do you wonder

about me,

the way I wonder

about you?

Perhaps

this glass between us

distorts how I see you,

how you perceive me.

Perhaps

there is only

this film of silica

keeping us

from

knowing the other.

If this glass were cut,

would we bleed

together?

Responses to “Through a Glass Darkly”

  1. johncoyote

    I enjoyed the poem. I like poems that open the door to questions and thoughts. A excellent poem.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks John! I have found a lot of fresh inspiration in reading short stories and poems which intrigue and tease the mind – I’m so glad I could achieve that with this piece. I was trying for it… 🙂

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  3. Gallivanta

    Yes, what do they see?

    1. melodylowes

      Wouldn’t it be fun to do some spying?? 😉

  4. Robert Rife

    Fantastic. There’s a back story here, isn’t there? But alas, I wax presumptuous.

    1. melodylowes

      Isn’t there always a back story? 😉

      1. Robert Rife

        Well, in any honest literature, yes. Well done.

  5. Eric

    Melody, dear. Melody. Melody. Melody. I am speechless— Such talent. You are in a poetic renaissance. Is there room for two? 😉 E PS- I pour one more cup of coffee and I shall ponder it again and again.

    1. melodylowes

      Wow – making Eric speechless? Epic! 🙂 Thanks so much…

      1. Eric

        Ouch! 😉

  6. Symanntha Renn

    Beautiful, insightful and intriguing. One of my favorites!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Symanntha! 🙂

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