Unbidden Fog

pines in the fog

Tears spring up,

unbidden fog

to paint puddles into the equation.

She dashes them away,

angry that they would fall

into her pea soup.

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14 comments on “Unbidden Fog

  1. Gallivanta says:

    That is a tearful tale 🙂 Clever !

  2. Heidi Viars says:

    I think she should try chicken-soup… it’s better for her soul!

  3. Eric says:

    Sometimes we pea ‘pon ourselves, sometimes it’s served as neighbor’s stew. A dew, my Lady! A fond adieu… 😉

  4. Oh, the tyranny of tears that show up in spite of herculean efforts to keep them at bay… I really enjoyed this one, Melody!

    Blessings ~ Wendy

  5. Debbie says:

    I’ve had to fight off those tears at times too. Thank you for the way you teach us through your poetry!

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