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The Closet

She smiles, a slow, careful smile that curdles on top like bad milk, a skin freezing in increments over troubled waters.  “I don’t know what you’re talking about,” she says to the accompaniment of the skeletons doing a jig in her coat closet.

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She smiles,

a slow, careful smile

that curdles on top like bad milk,

a skin freezing in increments over troubled

waters.  “I don’t know what you’re talking about,” she says

to the accompaniment of the skeletons doing a jig in her coat closet.

Responses to “The Closet”

  1. Gallivanta

    Oh gosh, it’s bad enough having skeletons in the closet but having ones that jig makes me wonder if it is safe to have a closet at all! As for that curdling smile….!!!

    1. melodylowes

      Kinda creepy, I know… But all experiences, even creepy ones, are open season to a poet! 🙂

  2. Heidi Viars

    I think it’s time for spring cleaning … out with the dingy, stinky stuff in the closet 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Open and honest is best, yes? 🙂

  3. greenlightlady

    Wow! You are a mind-reader, Melody… I was just thinking about how different life could have been for a family that chose to deny there was alcoholism in their family, and they watched their husband/dad drink himself to death. So sad.

    Blessings ~ Wendy

    1. melodylowes

      There’s an awful lot of denial rattling around… You’re right – that is very sad.

  4. Debbie

    Only you could bring us a lesson like this! Thank you, Melody!

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Thanks Debbie. This is a hard one for me – denial can be so dangerous! Shedding light in those dark hidden places is so difficult – and so necessary for healing.

  5. jaels

    You’re definitely looking through my windows–that dang closet of skeletons–arrgghh.

    1. melodylowes

      Tell me about it. ‘Dem bones are rattling something fierce. Hang in there!

      1. jaels

        I wonder if my manager would notice, if I nailed and duct-taped my closet shut???

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