Panic throws up her force field and solidifies resistance to the truth; denial hardens her . tortoise-shell exterior. Her heart has been spared in this temporary cocoon, but greenhouse emissions . end up blowing a lot of hot air, and little else of any real substance. Her foray into the real world . can’t…

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Panic throws up her

force field and solidifies

resistance to the truth;

denial hardens her

.

tortoise-shell exterior.

Her heart has been spared

in this temporary cocoon,

but greenhouse emissions

.

end up blowing a lot of hot

air, and little else of any

real substance. Her foray

into the real world

.

can’t be put off forever,

or she will stunt in her

space capsule, grow gangly

in her soul’s quest for

.

a fruitful life. She hasn’t

yet tasted sun skin to skin,

or roots flying free, or

she would break out.

 

Responses to “Break Out”

  1. Gallivanta

    That’s an intriguing glass house in the photo.

    1. melodylowes

      It’s a water jug with the bottom cut out of it. I reuse these for my tomatoes – they work just like a miniature greenhouse.

      1. Gallivanta

        A glass water jug?

      2. melodylowes

        Plastic, actually.

      3. Gallivanta

        Ah, okay; I thought it might be plastic but you made it look like glass. Clever!

  2. tiny lessons blog

    Powerful poem! Her sights are set on the sun, and she’ll reach up with just a bit more growing!

    1. melodylowes

      Yay for her!!

  3. I HAVE A VOICE

    I relate this to us humans!

    1. melodylowes

      Absolutely! My poetry almost always has more than one meaning – one literal and one a little deeper. I’m glad you catch the points which are hiding a bit! 🙂

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