Grief, that grittiest of sandpapers, rubs her frayed edges raw. Scars assemble, a vortex of baffling borders to rake in pain the more efficiently. And still, she blooms – true grit may render her raw, but it also polishes brass and buffs out blemishes – if she will allow it to.

Grief,
that grittiest
of sandpapers, rubs
her frayed edges raw. Scars
assemble, a vortex of baffling borders
to rake in pain the more efficiently. And still,
she blooms – true grit may render her raw, but it also
polishes brass and buffs out blemishes – if she will allow it to.
What are your thoughts?