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A Peel Like Yours

  A peel like yours leaves nothing to the imagination. It reveals your soul-shape, what you wear under your game face on market day. My heart sees underneath, to the freshly squeezed fruit, the way you drip with flavour and leach nutrition and satisfy my thirst for transparency.    

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A peel like yours

leaves nothing to the

imagination. It reveals

your soul-shape,

what you wear

under your game face

on market day. My

heart sees underneath,

to the freshly squeezed

fruit, the way you

drip with flavour

and leach nutrition

and satisfy my

thirst for

transparency.

 

 

Responses to “A Peel Like Yours”

  1. Caddo-Jael

    “Thirst for transparency”–interesting.

    1. melodylowes

      It’s quite the journey, from hiding to hope. I wonder how many of us long for real?

      1. Caddo-Jael

        Well, speaking for moi, alone–I’m a bit greedy: I want “real”, but I want it to be a “rosy real”, and without thorns. Guess this is sounding like Heaven, eh? Yeah, that’s what I want!!!

      2. melodylowes

        Me too. Waiting is the hard part. Gardening helps to pass the time! 🙂

      3. Caddo-Jael

        I can see where that would really work, Mel–since I’m not a gardener, I guess I’ll just have to keep writing poems or somethin’, eh? Love to you today–are you celebrating Father’s Day up north?

      4. melodylowes

        Yep – on a cold and rainy definitely un-fishing trip sort of way. 🙂

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