15 comments on “Day’s End

  1. Oooh, I especially like the image of clouds “nodding”! Lovely poem, start to finish, Mel!

  2. Gallivanta says:

    A gentle ending to the day. And hey, we can see the red barn without snow!

  3. Sissym says:

    So, as clouds are nodding, I am going to my home just now! For today, I can stop work!


  4. RoSy says:

    I’m ready to set with the sun.

  5. Anonymous says:

    Each word is so apt!

  6. elizabeth says:

    You really should put a chapter-book of your poems together and submit it to a publisher. Your work is wonderful!

  7. Love the soothing metaphors in this, Melody! Sleep well! πŸ™‚

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