Meanwhile, Melody Muses…

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melodylowes

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Morning Steals In

  Morning steals in, soft with surprise, Virgin sunbeams surfing on skies Froth-dipped on wave crests of sweet baby-blue, Wooing the lilies with top-coat of dew.

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Morning steals in, soft with surprise,

Virgin sunbeams surfing on skies

Froth-dipped on wave crests of sweet baby-blue,

Wooing the lilies with top-coat of dew.

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Responses to “Morning Steals In”

  1. Holly Michael

    lovely!

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    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Holly!

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  2. bearspawprint

    Oh my. Good morning.

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    1. melodylowes

      Good morning! 🙂

      Reply
  3. Sheryl @ Flowery Prose

    Beautiful verse, fits the photo perfectly! 🙂 Hope you have a wonderful weekend!

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    1. melodylowes

      Thanks, Sheryl! You, too! Here’s to lots of sunshine… 🙂

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  4. elizabeth

    Brilliant! I love the way your last lines wrap around the preceding lines and bring the glorious circle to a perfect close.

    I’m reminded of the layers of a Rose with this poem. Don’t ask me why, I don’t know the answer to that. 🙂

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    1. melodylowes

      How wonderful! Thanks Elizabeth!

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  5. bennetta faire

    WOW-WONDERFUL, Mel! Gorgeous verse, and the photo is like color on steroids. Beauteous, fabulous–intoxicating. God bless you extra today! love, sis Cj

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    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! Muchos gracias and merci beaucoup and danke and puna hvala… and more, but that’s all I got. 🙂

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      1. bennetta faire

        Careful, don’t hurt yourself, Mel!

  6. parth893

    this is so Pretty ❤ lovely 😀

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    1. melodylowes

      Thank you!

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