Her smile lifts her lips in all the expected places, her laughter chimes harmony at appropriate pauses. But her eyes – her eyes are empty windows, unshuttered channels to the brokenness within, where the lights are never on, and no one is ever home.        

gaping window

 

Her smile lifts her lips in all

the expected places, her

laughter chimes harmony at

appropriate pauses. But

her eyes – her eyes are empty

windows, unshuttered channels

to the brokenness within,

where the lights are never on,

and no one is ever home.

 

 

 

 

Responses to “Her Eyes”

  1. Gallivanta

    Aww; that one is so sad.

    1. melodylowes

      Isn’t it? It’s just what I saw, in those windows. I was there once – but have healed so much. I see new things now – and can leave those broken windows behind. I would love to be able to reach out to those who are still stuck there, to offer them some hope…

      1. Gallivanta

        I am sure you do that. Next we need some bright sparkly clean windows, from which we can clearly see and be seen….oops, who has those. Not me 😀

      2. melodylowes

        Haha! Not me either. Are you pressured to grab a squeegie?? 😉

      3. Gallivanta

        Never! But I did remember to wash my glasses this morning, so I can see the world a little better now ( which is not altogether good, because now I can really see how dirty are the windows!)

      4. melodylowes

        Ignorance can be bliss indeed. I can’t complain – I was moaning last week about how much I had to do, and how dirty the windows were – and hubby grabbed a ladder and started in on them himself. Lucky girl I am, no?? 🙂

      5. Gallivanta

        Wow; impressive! You are lucky.

      6. melodylowes

        I am blessed indeed…

  2. Caddo

    Yep, 3 years for me. Grateful the memories are only ashes now.

    1. melodylowes

      The lights are finally on. Isn’t that a wonderful gift?

  3. littlebtomato

    Such depth to this poem, Melody. What a gift to assemble the right words!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks so much. I sure enjoy the process!

  4. greenlightlady

    Melody, how beautifully sad she sounds. I love them both; this is a nicely matched photo and poem.

    Blessings ~ Wendy

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Wendy!!

  5. Lyle Krahn

    Powerfully sad but real.

    1. melodylowes

      I’ve seen it myself! And what a great image to exemplify the idea, with those gaping windows…

      1. Lyle Krahn

        Agreed

  6. Pam

    I believe that poetry and the arts can touch some who are so hurting that normal channels of communication don’t work. An image, a poem, a dance, a song, can touch a hurting person who’s heart is shutterend. Thanks for your dedication to your work and putting it out there. Blessings.

    1. melodylowes

      Wow. Thanks, Pam – I am truly blessed by your words. I believe them with my whole heart – I just forget sometimes that they also apply to me. 😉

      1. Pam

        I know what you mean – me, too. Let’s keep the faith, ok?

      2. melodylowes

        Pinky swear? 🙂 Maybe we could be in a reminder club?

      3. Pam

        done!

  7. I HAVE A VOICE

    ALWAYS awed by your viewpoint and vision ~ However, I didn’t feel or see any sadness rather, this conjectured for me, the blessing of having eyes to see the trajectory of God’s beauties ~ My sister was in a room for 17 years, bedridden & attached to a huge respirator that wouldn’t allow her to go outside. I’d have given anything to get her a sky roof! A pair of eyes that could see through walls! I love your writing ~Faithfully Debbie

    1. melodylowes

      Wow. What a significant shift in perspective you have given me here. I feel thankful to be learning from you!

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