Full Meal Deal

chewed lamb's ear leaf

It really ate her up –

and she, feeling teeth,

surrendered flesh

pound by pound,

giving hatred

a full meal deal.

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11 comments on “Full Meal Deal

  1. Gallivanta says:

    And everyone got indigestion! Love the lilies in the header; holding on to summer 🙂

  2. Debbie says:

    I love how you write from what you see, wherever that takes you! My favorite part was , “and she, feeling teeth, surrendered flesh.” Wonderfully good!

  3. Caddo says:

    Been there–indigestion doesn’t begin to describe it.

  4. RoSy says:

    Oh my!
    Well done though 🙂

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