She ordered Romeo from her balcony of happy endings; what came in the mail dried dreams to dust, delivered disillusionment stillborn. Seeking life in the garden below reduced love to mere snake in the grass; unnumbered shattered crescent moons, galling tear-stained timekeepers, kept pace with waning confidence, while wounds slowly faded, shadows on the dial.…

Romeo balcony

She ordered Romeo from

her balcony of happy

endings; what came in the mail

dried dreams to dust, delivered

disillusionment stillborn.

Seeking life in the garden

below reduced love to mere

snake in the grass; unnumbered

shattered crescent moons, galling

tear-stained timekeepers, kept pace

with waning confidence, while

wounds slowly faded, shadows

on the dial. When once she

lifted her head, above thorns

and crafty serpents, True Love

waited there, on silvery

wings. Inhaling sweeter air

gave new dreams fresh purpose; her

songs, sung not from empty purse

but full heart, hold the power

to stir even paradise

lost. From her balcony she

commands nothing, but receives

what the moon delivers as

a legacy wrapped in love.

Responses to “Her Balcony”

  1. Robert Alan Rife

    Wow. This is bad. ass. Very cool.

    1. melodylowes

      😉 I think I’ll say ‘thank you’ and then send you to the principal’s office…

      1. Robert Alan Rife

        Is she hot? Ha! I’m here all week. Try the veal.

      2. melodylowes

        She IS hot – and I’ve tried the veal, thank you. I recommend the chicken. 😉

      3. Robert Alan Rife

        ; )

  2. tiny lessons blog

    Loved it Melody! A story of new beginnings and the power of love seedlings – even when strewn among thorns and crafty serpents.

    1. melodylowes

      A love story where no one dies in the end. Gotta love that! 🙂

  3. Patty Perkins

    Absolutely beautiful…what a way with words you have!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you, Patty!

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