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Automated Teller

  I, bankrupt beggar; You, bank machine, manager of reserves. You, Giver of good, grace dispensing like crisp bills; I, endless consumer craving else, spending gifts like water. You, lending to paupers currency to purchase Life; I, debts mounting, limp destitute to soak up charity, walk away with my hands and heart full.

ATM

 

I, bankrupt

beggar; You,

bank machine,

manager

of reserves.

You, Giver

of good, grace

dispensing

like crisp bills;

I, endless

consumer

craving else,

spending gifts

like water.

You, lending

to paupers

currency

to purchase

Life; I, debts

mounting, limp

destitute

to soak up

charity,

walk away

with my hands

and heart full.

Responses to “Automated Teller”

  1. Skye @ TheSanctuaryofMyHeart

    OK…I will always think of you every time I use one of those charity machines. 🙂 Well done!!!

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Don’t you love thinking about making endless withdrawals for free???

      1. Skye @ TheSanctuaryofMyHeart

        ummmmmm…..yes!!!! 😀

  2. Eric

    forgot my PIN…
    guess i’ll never
    win.
    what a sin.
    could you
    loan me a fin?

    1. melodylowes

      Enquire within.

      1. Eric

        …not again.

      2. melodylowes

        Grin.
        (Do I win?)

  3. Gallivanta

    God in everything! I am just on my way out to the ATM. I shall inform the machine that it has some stiff competition in the banking business and it needs to cut me a better deal 😀

    1. melodylowes

      Hahahaha!!! I LOVE it! Get bossy!

      1. Gallivanta

        Mmmm….it just told me I am running on empty 😉

      2. melodylowes

        Ouch! 😉 Time for a new ATM….. hehe

      3. Gallivanta

        😀

  4. Patty Perkins

    Clever. Very clever!

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Thanks, Patty!

  5. Tiny

    This poem immediately reminded me of a winter day about 25 years ago when I was in a shopping mall with my then toddler son. He wanted a new toy and I told him we didn’t have the money to buy it. He was sitting in his stroller and pointed to an ATM and said: mom, you can always take money from the wall 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      HA! A bit over-simplified, perhaps, but not wrong. Not by a long shot. Smart kid… 🙂

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