Great Expectations

  The seeds of Great Expectations rooted deep, but she tasted their fruits not in the fair soil of trinkets fashioned from sturdy stems, cabinetry of beauty and elegance displaying the wares of Kings, nor in the expression of the printed page, pouring forth speech from pulpy loins. Less still the warmth of a billion…

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The seeds of Great Expectations rooted deep,

but she tasted their fruits not in the fair soil of trinkets

fashioned from sturdy stems,

cabinetry of beauty and elegance

displaying the wares of Kings,

nor in the expression of the printed page,

pouring forth speech from pulpy loins.

Less still the warmth of a billion fires,

songs of a billion kettles

as her fuel gave Man comfort from the endless darkness.

It came, not in the power and might

of the straight-rimmed arrow’s shaft

or the machinations of the torture room,

but in the beautiful irony of Life –

the abandonment of her burdens,

 bouquet of ultimate surrender.

Here, where she came to terms with her brokenness,

her truest beauty harvested

Great Expectations.

Responses to “Great Expectations”

  1. Nicodemas

    This is so beautiful! It’s complex and beautiful at the same time.

    1. melodylowes

      Wow – I’m complex! Wait til I tell my teenagers…. 😉

  2. cindy knoke

    beautifully written~

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Cindy!

  3. Naomi Brown

    A cut above! Love the metaphor and the various images used plus the music in many of the phrases.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks for that great feedback. Appreciate it!

  4. Heidi Viars

    In brokenness and surrender are the richest of life’s lessons … THANK YOU for sharing this deeply moving piece of art, dear friend! LOVE IT!

    1. melodylowes

      Ah, thank you, Heidi!

  5. Gallivanta

    The versatility of the tree. 😉

    1. melodylowes

      Indeed!! Not sure where the torture device came from. Halloween influence, perhaps? 😉

      1. Gallivanta

        Probably; I thought you meant the trees that made up the Cross.

      2. melodylowes

        Ooh, that’s AWESOME! I was trying to work that in somehow but wasn’t sure how. That makes me happy! 🙂

      3. Gallivanta

        Yay! Sorted. 🙂

  6. tinamhunt

    Again, I need a “love it” button.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Tina!

  7. Glenda Mills

    Wow…beautiful Melody…coming to terms with brokenness does bring beauty and great expectations. I’ve been there too! Thanks for sharing.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Glenda! I think when we understand how needy we really are, then we can BEGIN!

  8. Wendell A. Brown

    Simply beautiful Mel!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Wendell! How are things?

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