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Like Candy

He pours his voice like taffy. Creamy folds undulate, smooth to silk in her hungry ears. But when he pulls his words, stretches the truth out of shape she, generously buttered, finds there is nothing she can hold on to. Communication – hardened and brittle – shatters in the stillness; she is left with only…

taffy

He pours his voice like taffy.

Creamy folds undulate, smooth to silk in her

hungry ears. But when he pulls his words, stretches

the truth out of shape she, generously buttered, finds there is

nothing she can hold on to. Communication – hardened

and brittle –

shatters in the stillness; she is left with only her bitter

memories of how easily those empty calories

used to go down.

Responses to “Like Candy”

  1. joannerambling

    Well said

  2. Gallivanta

    😦 😦 I knew there was a reason I didn’t like taffy. 😉

    1. melodylowes

      Hahaha!! No more taffy for you!! 😏

      1. Gallivanta

        I can handle that. Just don’t deprive me of chocolate…EVER….please. 🙂

      2. melodylowes

        I KNEW WE WERE SOUL SISTERS. 😍

      3. Gallivanta

        😀

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