You Hide Your Scars Well

You hide your scars well. Wind has wailed and blasted skin and sucked the water from every cell. I see your petals are wearing thin but from here it’s hard to tell that you are walking wounded now, limping with a twisted cane. Deeper furrows line your brow, etched with tools of deepest pain. Yet…

You hide your scars well.

Wind has wailed and blasted skin

and sucked the water from every cell.

I see your petals are wearing thin

but from here it’s hard to tell

that you are walking wounded now,

limping with a twisted cane.

Deeper furrows line your brow,

etched with tools of deepest pain.

Yet golden still, your face shines on;

you smile as if you saw the gain –

that tragedy, its substance gone

had fought with you, and fought in vain.

Responses to “You Hide Your Scars Well”

  1. Petro Neagu

    I love the last 2 verses 🙂 It’s quite uplifting for me.

    1. melodylowes

      It is a poem of hope! Thank you Petro!

  2. Symanntha Renn

    It’s funny, how inanimate objects can give us hope.

    1. melodylowes

      God hides His lessons in plain sight for all of us to benefit from in our distress! If we have ears to hear and eyes to see… 🙂

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