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Quench

Liquid refresher course, learning by osmosis, a study in cyclical science; Draped in cloak of geometric beauty, abacus adding drip to drop. Verbs, how I love you, let me count the ways in which You personify perfection in your description; Suit action to word, and call it like It is – trickle, plop, ripple, Dazzle, drizzle,…

Liquid refresher course, learning by osmosis, a study in cyclical science;

Draped in cloak of geometric beauty, abacus adding drip to drop.

Verbs, how I love you, let me count the ways in which

You personify perfection in your description;

Suit action to word, and call it like

It is – trickle, plop, ripple,

Dazzle, drizzle,

Quench.

Responses to “Quench”

  1. gladiuspoeticus

    aha! funnel poetry. nicely done.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you – it is a lot of fun to try different techniques for different occasions! 🙂

  2. searunner

    Nice shot! Very crisp!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! I love how this one turned out – they don’t all do that. Have you noticed that yet? 🙂

    2. melodylowes

      Thank you! I love how this one turned out – they don’t all do that. Have you noticed that yet? 🙂

  3. Petro Neagu

    I love the “design”! It must’ve taken a lot of brains to put that up so nicely 🙂

    Hugs

  4. sandy

    This made me smile!

  5. poetryandmusings

    Refreshing!!!!!

  6. Herbstbaum

    🙂

  7. sprigblossoms

    Very refreshing poetry and image, Melody!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you so much for your kind comment! Happy writing!

  8. moiracampbell

    Sacred Geometry in all. Funny you tripped on verbs, as I tripped over prepositions the other day. Great poem.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Moira! I guess we writers have a thing for words, huh? 🙂

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