My 90 -10 Split

My ship is 90% submerged, rolling in waters right up to my neck; My soul is 90% inebriated, drunk on sorrow that covers the deck. My heart is 90% broken up, reeling from blow after blow on its door; My path is 90% washed out, carried to sea with a wind-blasted roar. But that means…

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My ship is 90% submerged, rolling in waters right up to my neck;

My soul is 90% inebriated, drunk on sorrow that covers the deck.

My heart is 90% broken up, reeling from blow after blow on its door;

My path is 90% washed out, carried to sea with a wind-blasted roar.

But that means –

10% of my ship is afloat, enough for my Captain to steer my poor boat;

I’m 10% sober, and that is enough to choose not to drink of the sorrow’s rough moat.

A full 10% of my heart is okay, so use it I will to recover my wounds;

I’m 10% accurate in finding my course, so after corrections, I will be home soon…

Responses to “My 90 -10 Split”

  1. Herbstbaum

    I like your 10/90 % rule 🙂
    Mine is: 38% is almost 40%. 40% are almost 50%. More as a half is . . . .

    1. melodylowes

      No matter what the split is, there is always hope! 🙂

      1. Herbstbaum

        Yes!

      2. Peter Wiebe

        Amen!

      3. melodylowes

        🙂

  2. Caddo Veil

    Oh, I just want to send you a hug, Melody!

    1. melodylowes

      Hugs gratefully accepted… 🙂

  3. Petro Neagu

    I wonder why I can relate so much to your poem 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      It must be your travelling blues… 🙂

  4. Duko

    Reblogged this on Duko Photoblog and commented:
    Great poem from my photo……

  5. Duko

    What to say……great!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you for allowing me to use your great photo!

  6. Alex Khoo

    Nice post here!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you Alex!

      1. Alex Khoo

        You are welcome!

  7. George W Mahn III

    Excellent!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! 🙂

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