Morning Mist

Evening ushers in the dew

Which clings to every part of you

And soaks you in its sloppy kiss,

Dressing you in morning mist.

9 comments on “Morning Mist

  1. Maria Tatham says:

    Melody, fabulous! I like the usual mixture of elegance and funny ordinary idioms, like ‘sloppy kiss’!

    • melodylowes says:

      Glad you ‘approved’ of that – I wondered when I wrote it, and then liked it well enough to leave it alone! How is the writing coming along? Did your heroine plant her garden yet?? 🙂

      • Maria Tatham says:

        Nope, she is a little lacka-daisy-cal in her gardening efforts…But I have been finishing up her story. I copied and pasted your notes about possible plants on the front page of the draft, with other important things not to forget to paint in later. Thank you for asking, Melody! Hope your book is doing well! Your photos and poems continue to be so very entertaining!

  2. Amanda says:

    I agree with Maria about the sloppy kiss 🙂
    Lovely!

  3. Caddo Veil says:

    LOVE it!!!

  4. Petro Neagu says:

    Wow! That’s some piece of art, Miss Melody! You are getting better and better!

    Hugs

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