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Pier Pressure

Will you hold me when I wander, When my cortex tells me lies, When the sorrows roll like thunder, When the waves and fears capsize? Will you anchor me with comfort, Kiss my furrowed brow away, Whisper low how much you love me, Be my home port when I stray? Will you shower me with…

Will you hold me when I wander,

When my cortex tells me lies,

When the sorrows roll like thunder,

When the waves and fears capsize?

Will you anchor me with comfort,

Kiss my furrowed brow away,

Whisper low how much you love me,

Be my home port when I stray?

Will you shower me with sunshine

Under stormy, clouded skies?

Will you be my pier when pressured

Or is your strength a thin disguise?

Responses to “Pier Pressure”

  1. ivonprefontaine

    Excellent play on words.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you, Ivon!

  2. LeBlogDuSpectateurSentimentale

    love your poetry. this one says exactly my thoughts.

    1. melodylowes

      Merci! Votre mots sont belles! (Is that correct??) 🙂

  3. Memoirs of a Dragon

    The image is perfect for your words! Excellent!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! The image spurred the words – I’m glad you find it a good match! 🙂

  4. roughseasinthemed

    Love the photo and the words are so thought-provoking

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you. Thinking is good, right? 🙂

  5. marriedmybestfriend
  6. Caddo Veil

    I absolutely love, love, love this one!!! It’s now among my faves of yours, Melody.

    1. melodylowes

      *stammer, blush* Thank you, Queen of the uplifters!

  7. Amanda

    ❤ ❤ ❤

    Love the picture so much as well!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you so much, Amanda! I’m glad you enjoyed it! 🙂

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