Morning light steals into view,
Waking senses come to life;
Day arises, dressed in blue,
Taking slanted rays as wife.
Fresh perspective, fresh refrain,
No mistakes to cast their gloom;
Dawning sun with all to gain,
Rises now with hope in womb.
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Meanwhile, Melody Muses... 
Melody, this is the height of blogger cheese protocol, I know. Please forgive me. But I wrote something similar just this morning. Let’s compare notes: http://robslitbits.com/2012/09/10/hope-arising/
Hey – I’ve done that myself, so if I have been cheesy, I guess I’m in good company!! 🙂
And heeeeeeeere’s yer sign…git ‘er done!
🙂 Gouda, perhaps?
I LOVE that the day takes slanting rays of sun as a wife–that is pure Brilliance, Melody!! Refreshingly unique–I wish I’d thunk it!! And you have that wonderful garden “cross” in there too! God bless you, dear heart–love, Caddo
I love how my arch has been transformed now in my mind into that cross – how precious to walk beneath it!
Amazing gift, indeed!
How nice to read this in the morning with a cup of tea! Love it. especially the last sentence: Dawning sun with all to gain, Rises now with hope in womb.
So much brilliance is to come!
What a lovely picture I have of you in the sunshine with your tea – thank you for stopping by, Yun Yi!
Both the poem & picture are lovely! Thank you for the treat.
~ Wendy
Thank you Wendy!