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Alive and Kicking

Which is more alive? Sometimes you need to know when to fold, when to halt the forward momentum. The irony bleeds on blades of steel – blooming is most profitable when ground to a halt; there, in the secret places, seeds are knit from crisping petals, distended ovaries, dried husks of youth. Once the shell…

Which is more alive?

Sometimes

you need to know when to fold,

when to halt the forward momentum.

The irony bleeds on blades of steel –

blooming is most profitable

when ground to a halt;

there,

in the secret places,

seeds are knit from

crisping petals,

distended ovaries,

dried husks of youth.

Once the shell of beauty is ceremoniously cracked,

rendered useless,

torn limb from limb

in ferocious labour pains,

what spills from broken caskets is

Alive and Kicking…

Responses to “Alive and Kicking”

  1. Herbstbaum

    wonderful!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! πŸ˜€

  2. Caddo Veil

    And, the flower is?? Also–do you not get slapped by WP for using so many tags and cats? I see you’re a “dot com”–so maybe, then, you get to use more (unlimited?)? I’m a dot com now, too–still learning what the perks are…

    1. melodylowes

      The flower is ‘campanula’ – also called ‘blue clips’. They come in variations of blue/purple and white. Aren’t they pretty? I have no idea about tags and such – I’ve never been ‘slapped’ by WP for anything so maybe the upgrade allows for more ‘stuff’?

      1. Caddo Veil

        Lovely name, campanula…might work into a poem for me. You’re probably correct, that the upgrade allows for more “stuff”–so I think I’ll go for it!!

  3. johnydecali

    Do you write you’re own poems? They’re great.

    1. melodylowes

      Yep – they are all mine! Most of the pictures are, too – from my garden…

      1. johnydecali

        That’s amazing! I try to write my own poems but it feels forced to me :/

        Great photos btw πŸ™‚

      2. melodylowes

        Thank you!

  4. Sumithra Sriram

    Hey!! I would like to nominate you for the Super-Sweet blogging award!!
    Here’s the link!! http://hearingwiththeeye.wordpress.com/2012/09/28/another-award/
    Hugs,
    Sumithra.

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