Strangled by frost’s fists, your cells surrender. Cytoplasm spills from pores hard-pressed by mercury’s plunge. It is time. Time to beat a hasty retreat, seal off summer’s silhouette and lay up treasures for seasons to come. Capitulation, not abandonment; acquiescence, not succumbing. After your pupal pause,  Sun caresses your dead skin; you will rise again.

Strangled by frost’s fists,

your cells surrender.

Cytoplasm spills from pores

hard-pressed by mercury’s plunge.

It is time.

Time to beat a hasty retreat,

seal off summer’s silhouette

and lay up treasures

for seasons to come.

Capitulation, not abandonment;

acquiescence, not succumbing.

After your pupal pause,

 Sun caresses your dead skin;

you will

rise again.

Responses to “Rise Again”

  1. Robert Rife

    Ooh, evocative.

    1. melodylowes

      An ooh AND a big word! Yippee! 🙂 (Thanks, Rob!)

      1. Robert Rife

        Here to serve. It’s just the kinda guy I am.

      2. melodylowes

        And humble, too! How can you contain all that glory? 😀

      3. Robert Rife

        To speak of it again would be counter intuitive, an embedded irony of humility itself. Hence, I say nothing further other…well, except for the previous. Humbly yours, Robert Alan Rife, BA, MA, BS.

      4. melodylowes

        I will take that in the most non-counter-intuitive way I can… in the only way possible coming from one who uses the addendum of BS. 😀

      5. Robert Rife

        Then it’s settled. I bid thee a good day, Ms. Lowes.

      6. melodylowes

        And I thee! 🙂

      7. Robert Rife

        Thankth.

  2. Caddo Veil

    WOW! You must have been a science whiz too, eh?

    1. melodylowes

      Um – no. Just overhearing my kids studying Biology… *giggle*

  3. Glenda Mills

    Sent from my iPad

  4. Debbie

    Loved the ending , Melody! Thank you!

    1. melodylowes

      Great! You’re very welcome!

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