Candid Camera

You think that these layers of cold pseudonyms, 6-ply stratification, red-herring Venetian mask will conceal inadequacy and cloak sparse spirit, but I see you; your true colours spill through the cracks of your costume. Fig-leaf false fronts are destined to fall; lay smoke screen aside so I can touch the true self, and be blessed…

You think

that these layers of cold pseudonyms,

6-ply stratification,

red-herring Venetian mask

will conceal inadequacy

and cloak sparse spirit,

but I see you;

your true colours

spill through the cracks

of your costume.

Fig-leaf false fronts

are destined to fall;

lay smoke screen aside

so I can

touch the true self,

and be blessed by your

candid camera.

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Responses to “Candid Camera”

  1. Robert Rife

    Uh, like yeah! Very nice.

    1. melodylowes

      Why, thank you! 🙂

  2. Caddo Veil

    Wow, what a photo, eh?!

    1. melodylowes

      That was the day I missed the sunrise to get to church – the frost was PINK and so heavenly! I’m counting on another opportunity one day…

      1. Caddo Veil

        Oooh, pink frost–I love it!!!

  3. Gwen

    The specific allusions you selected are perfect for this theme–one I love. Genius.:)

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks so much, Gwen! I am honored by your high praise!

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