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Tender Stalk

Tender stalk, the time has come to stand alone against the winds that howl and seek to beat a drum to dictate what your heart rescinds; frailty, stand strong and true, though wind blow cold, and night bleed blue.

Tender stalk, the time has come

to stand alone against the winds

that howl and seek to beat a drum

to dictate what your heart rescinds;

frailty, stand strong and true,

though wind blow cold, and night bleed blue.

Responses to “Tender Stalk”

  1. ljlenehan

    Beautiful…

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! 🙂

  2. adaisygarden

    Absolutely love the photo! Beautiful words as well.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Daisy! My son will be graduating in the spring… *sigh*

  3. Caddo Veil

    Wow-Wonderful, Melody–I LIKE it a lot!

    1. Caddo Veil

      PS–the last 2 lines have the feel of a Commando Caddo battle cry. We ARE Victorious–Overcomers with Holy can-do Spirit!! (I’ll settle down now and eat a turkey sandwich…)

      1. melodylowes

        Turkey-to-go – yum! And you let those Commando Caddo-style cries loose so they don’t build up pressure and BLOW us all away one day! *giggle*

    2. melodylowes

      Thank you, Caddo! I guess we all have tender bits – some more than others, depending on where we’re at in our journey.

  4. lylekrahn

    Only the perspective of a cold SK wind gives the full perspective of the metaphor. Nicely done. I continue to be amazed at how many poems you produce.

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 I guess finding my voice at midlife means I spill words all over the place! There seems to be a lot to say… I always wonder if it will dry up once I’ve had my say, so I write while the words are in my head just in case they stop one day!

  5. Debbie

    I loved that, ‘night bleed blue’! Great job, Melody!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Debbie!

  6. BK

    Hi Melody, I have used this beautiful photo of yours with a quotation by Melody Beattie in my Facebook page ‘Symphony of Love’ at: http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=562853387075012&set=a.230592023634485.80826.188411217852566&type=1&theater&notif_t=like. If you do not like the use of it, please let me know and I will remove it immediately. Sorry for any inconvenience caused.

    1. melodylowes

      That’s just fine. I’a a Melody Beattie fan!! 🙂

      1. symphonyoflove

        Thanks a lot Melody! Have a great day! 🙂

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