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Unsure

Unsure, she remains suspended in thought; the question is, should she stick with a winter she knows, or risk it all to find fabled spring? Terror freezes her to the spot. But what is faith, if not falling? And what is trust, if not taking a tumble? Perhaps precipice predates promise; maybe reward is a…

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Unsure,

she remains suspended in thought;

the question is,

should she stick with a winter she knows,

or risk it all to find fabled spring?

Terror freezes her to the spot.

But what is faith, if not falling?

And what is trust, if not taking a tumble?

Perhaps precipice predates promise;

maybe reward is a result of release.

Does she have what it takes?

She’s hanging on,

unsure…

Responses to “Unsure”

  1. Caddo Veil

    “Fabled spring”–that’s a good one. I say, go for it–leap!!

    1. melodylowes

      That seems to be the general consensus… in the end, the decision was out of her hands, because the entire icicle took the plunge. 🙂

  2. littlebtomato

    I can relate to this one. So moving!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! 🙂

  3. Donna

    Yes, leap! It has great reward!

    1. melodylowes

      Go, little drip, go! 🙂 Thanks, Donna….

  4. RoSy

    Let’s take the leap into spring!

    1. melodylowes

      I like the sound of that! I’m in!

  5. cythereandreams

    It’s like you’re the narrator of my life, I swear.

    1. melodylowes

      Some experiences seem to be common to us all… Thanks for dropping by! 🙂

  6. Debbie

    I loved this so much, and the longing to leap even if I need a little nudge! God bless you!

    1. melodylowes

      There are times when I need a downright push, so your nudge is pretty okay! 🙂

  7. Symanntha Renn

    Great picture!
    This poem makes me think of that song by Reba about “is there life out there?” which is one of my favorite songs.

    1. melodylowes

      Good connection – I wasn’t thinking of that song, but it sure fits, doesn’t it?

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