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Pulling Petals

Childhood sits in meadow bower, pulling petals from a flower – Love me not, or love me well, only days to come will tell. Time moves on, and hope blooms bright, but girlish dreams will die this night. * Maiden rests in meadow green, pulling petals from their sheen; dying, petals lose their bloom as…

Daisy in the dark

Childhood sits in meadow bower,

pulling petals from a flower –

Love me not, or love me well,

only days to come will tell.

Time moves on, and hope blooms bright,

but girlish dreams will die this night.

*

Maiden rests in meadow green,

pulling petals from their sheen;

dying, petals lose their bloom

as tears soak bridal glory’s tomb.

Time moves on, and hope fades fast,

the die is set, her fate is cast.

*

Mother sinks in meadow shade,

pulling petals in the glade;

habit tells her love belongs

to children and their hopeful songs.

Time moves on, and hope lies dead,

daisies, fringeless, sink like lead.

*

Woman weeps in meadow bare,

pulling petals which aren’t there;

empty heart bleeds petals past,

and bleeding, seeds its peace at last.

Time moves on, and hope renews,

as Wounded hands hold girl’s deep bruise.

Responses to “Pulling Petals”

  1. Lady Lovely

    Very lovely. Great shot!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! I got tired of snow pictures, so decided to change it up a little! 🙂

      1. Lady Lovely

        It’s a very nice change!

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  3. Robert Rife

    I like the sense of emotional movement this evokes.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Rob! You always seem to catch out my more soul-hungry pieces…

      1. Robert Rife

        They’re more vulnerable, more probing.

  4. Eric

    Your longest pieces have the most depth, Melody. They are the ones I love the most. The wonderful thing about hope, love and flowers is that as more time passes they each gain more depth and progeny. Perhaps it is the same with poetry. If only the poets knew. 😉 E

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Eric! Poetry is so very like putting out your dirty laundry – maybe this is where the power of words is at its height?

      1. Eric

        Poetry: the more real it is, the more it is. 🙂

  5. Seyi sandra

    Great poem/ beautiful picture!!
    🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Sandra! I got tired of posting snow… we still have so much of it. Soon there will be fresh flowers to inspire me! 🙂

      1. Seyi sandra

        We have showers of snow in London this morning, I can’t wait to read your ‘springy’ poems and relish those fresh flowers… are we going to have spring this year at all? 😦

      2. melodylowes

        Snowstorm here again, too – driving was treacherous today. It is getting rather old, isn’t it? 😦

  6. tiny lessons blog

    Wonderful and touching poem of life and healing.

  7. cythereandreams

    Wow. Breathtaking. Thanks for posting!!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you so much for your kind words….

  8. Holly Michael

    Very deep and touching. Wonderful!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you, Holly! 🙂

  9. Debbie

    Wowsers, Melody! This was like a moving picture story . .just glorious! Thank you for writing like you do!

    1. melodylowes

      Nice to see you back, Debbie – I’ve missed you! ;(

  10. lvsrao

    Nice one.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks very much! 🙂

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