Invisible Woman

Originally posted on Meanwhile, Melody Muses…: Courtesy Yu Jinyoung’s incredible ‘Invisible’ collection at London’s Union Gallery Silent, I slip among you – The Invisible Woman. I eat your food, I laugh at your jokes, I nod and smile at words brittle as bones and nourishing as chalk. Skinless, I leak and stain but your eyes…

A year ago, this poem struck a chord with my readers. What are your thoughts today?

melodylowes's avatarMeanwhile, Melody Muses…

Silent,

I slip among you –

The Invisible Woman.

I eat your food,

I laugh at your jokes,

I nod and smile at words

brittle as bones and nourishing as chalk.

Skinless,

I leak and stain

but your eyes perceive it not.

You see sunsets and flowers

and babies and happy endings

and paint over cracks with

an invisible brush.

I am from an ‘other’ world.

Silent,

I slip among you –

The Invisible Woman.

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Responses to “Invisible Woman”

  1. Alastair

    I feel like this sometimes

    1. melodylowes

      I suppose there are times when we all do – that feeling of being overlooked, or set apart because of our circumstances. Thanks for sharing that, Alastair.

      1. Alastair

        It’s all part and parcel of being middle-born. Middle child syndrome.

      2. melodylowes

        IS that it? Hmm, I guess I’m one of those, too. 🙂

      3. Alastair

        There was a survey done and around 80-odd% of middle children felt ignored, invisible, or just got the worst deal. I know I had pass-me downs whilst the eldest got new clothes so I had his cast-offs and my sister got new being young. One of the reasons I was bullied at school because of wearing things that had been seen before

      4. melodylowes

        Funny how those old memories can still sting, huh? 😦

      5. Alastair

        One of them things that will always be with me, and one of the reasons I will never have more than two kids. Not that I can any more 🙂

      6. melodylowes

        With two, there’s no middle! Brilliant! (Guess what? I have 2, as well! )

      7. Alastair

        😀 It’s one of those things that force you to not do the same as what happened in your childhood, You are refusing to let history repeat itself

      8. melodylowes

        Absolutely!

  2. momentswithmillie

    Incredible!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks! I think there must be times for all of us where we feel invisible to others. The journey to acceptance and wholeness is a bumpy ride – but freeing as well!

      1. momentswithmillie

        Absolutely. Well said.

  3. Debbie

    I wrote an invisible poem recently .. not for the blog, but just between God and I. 🙂 God bless you!

    1. melodylowes

      Some of those are deeply real, cries from the heart – aren’t you glad that we are not invisible to Him??

  4. lvsrao

    Well narrated.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you!

  5. I HAVE A VOICE

    ardent!

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Thanks for your visits, Deb!

  6. tiny lessons blog

    This poem is also new to me. The emotions beneath a “pretend happy” facade seem to stream out, it feels painful and healing at the same time.

    1. melodylowes

      Wonderful! I love what you can glean from this piece. ..

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