She raises a bloodied Fist not so much in triumph as defiance –  Fist brittle-caked in a shame so thick it bleeds in blushes. She shakes this cupped and twisted gauntlet at very God, and drinks rain, and wakes to dawn, and grows tired of the charade. Ambivalence rips deep – what if the sky’s…

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She raises a bloodied Fist

not so much in triumph

as defiance –

 Fist brittle-caked in

a shame so thick

it bleeds in blushes.

She shakes this cupped and twisted

gauntlet at very God,

and drinks rain,

and wakes to dawn,

and grows tired of the charade.

Ambivalence rips deep –

what if the sky’s blue

is for her?

The rain, a gentle nursing?

Unleashing the Fist

into a cup to hold blessing

might undo the last thread

that pretends to hold her together.

She grits her teeth against the

laceration

and pries. one. knuckle.

from its cradle,

saying good-bye to

the Fist.

Responses to “The Fist”

  1. Gallivanta

    Excellent photo. Yes, unleash the fist and hold the blessing 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      I think she is ready to do just that… 😀

  2. cythereandreams

    Wow – this makes me think of gladiators in an arena more than a flower, honestly. Powerful.

    1. melodylowes

      Life is rather similar to a gladiator ring in many ways, isn’t it? Thank you…

  3. perceptionoverjudgment

    BRILLIANT!!! This is VERY POWERFUL! I love how visual this poem is. You paint potent and striking pictures with your words. A masterpiece!!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you so much. I am humbled by your words – I really appreciate them!

  4. Caddo-Jael

    Wow, very raw today (must be something in the air). God bless you, my dear friend Mel–love, sis Caddo

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you. I’m so, so glad that you consider me a sister. That means a lot to me, tonight…

      1. Caddo-Jael

        Oh bless your heart, Sis Mel–I’ll get us both boo-hooing, but I never dreamed how far God would go to make good on some of His promises. Having “lost” my siblings, He has given me the choicest of the lot–here in the blog neighborhood. And it’s not about “deserving”, just that He loves us That Much!!

      2. melodylowes

        He is good on His promise, for those who have lost family, He provides a surrogate…

      3. Caddo-Jael

        Yippee-Skippee, YAY! (Oops, I think I just got a stitch in my side…)

  5. I HAVE A VOICE

    Strikingly a homerun !

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Thank you, Deborah!

  6. Debbie

    Another good lesson for me! Thank you, teacher Melody!

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Just remember your homework, and all will be well. (And don’t say the dog ate it, either!)

  7. RoSy

    I see a bust of hope coming out as she releases the fist! 😉

    1. melodylowes

      I do, too! She will soften, and grow, and give many people hope as she blooms. Thanks Rosy!

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