Layered

  Composition of petalled form – multi-faceted, layered, more than meets first glance. Hers is a beauty . of texture, where life’s hard knocks iron youth’s folly into wrinkles in heart and skin. Of colour, . where joy and tears mix, the yellows and blues combining to grow grass green. Of flavour, . where character’s…

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Composition of petalled form –

multi-faceted, layered,

more than meets first

glance. Hers is a beauty

.

of texture, where life’s hard

knocks iron youth’s folly

into wrinkles in heart

and skin. Of colour,

.

where joy and tears mix,

the yellows and blues

combining to grow grass

green. Of flavour,

.

where character’s finer

subtleties make ingesting

her presence delightfully

palatable. Of aroma, where

.

trials and tribulations have

heightened olfactory nerves

to the presence of peace. Mother,

wife, daughter, friend, professional –

.

petal to petal, sepal to stem,

they build the mosaic,

complexity of bloom. Hers

is a beauty to own, layered.

 

 

Responses to “Layered”

  1. russtowne

    I especially love the first and last 4 lines. Lovely, Melody.
    Russ

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Russ!

  2. theywhoseek

    This is beautiful! ~ Blessings ~

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you so much! 🙂

  3. roughseasinthemed

    Peony? Afraid the photo took my attention!

    1. melodylowes

      Actually a Rose tree of China, zoomed in quite a bit. Very reminiscent of a peony, indeed. The hummingbirds love ’em!

  4. Robert Rife

    You’re just getting better with age, aren’t ya? This is excellent.

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Is that a birthday jibe?? Thanks so much. I’, trying to experiment more with form and function – a tedious but fascinating process.

      1. Robert Rife

        So much contemporary poetry is largely an exercise in colloquial explorations of form and function or, sometimes, formlessness as function. It’s why I love struggling through sonnets, cinquain or haiku.

      2. melodylowes

        I’m finding a desire to take a class of learn more about different structures. I don’t always ‘get’ the formlessness of contemporary poetry – do you make your own rules?? I love sonnets…

      3. Robert Rife

        I’m almost afraid to “study” poetry too much for fear that I lose my present courage in experiencing it in a contemplative, ad hoc manner.

      4. melodylowes

        It’s a bit touchy, isn’t it? I don’t know – over-analyze and lose the fun creativity, or learn enough to become on of the greats????

      5. Robert Rife

        I love to learn from other poets themselves at this juncture. Being around other creative types is education/inspiration enough for me right now.

      6. Robert Rife

        Oh, and birthday jibe? I hardly think so given I’m going to be 50 in a few months! “Those who live in glass houses…”

      7. melodylowes

        “…should invest in good blinds?” haha

      8. Robert Rife

        Ha!

  5. I HAVE A VOICE

    I find that everything in nature reveals us to ourself ~don’t you believe ?

    1. melodylowes

      I absolutely agree. It is uncanny how many lessons there are all around us in the natural world. Thanks Deb!

  6. Heidi Viars

    I think I can smell them 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Technology – gotta love it. 😀 haha

  7. Gallivanta

    Thoroughly gorgeous.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Gallivanta! I apologize for not visiting lately – trying to do too many things at once, I’m afraid. I’ll be by soon!

      1. Gallivanta

        Not to worry. Those things just get layered on us all the time and it’s hard to see through to the surface sometimes.

  8. Caddo-Jael

    Oh good, someone else guessed peony first. I love the 2nd stanza best–speaks to me.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Caddo!

  9. ljlenehan

    Beautiful…

    1. melodylowes

      Why, thank you! 🙂

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