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Living

Living looks like fragility, petalled purity daring to open. Living smells like hope, tenuous aroma wafting on brittle breeze. Living tastes like cherries, sun-ripened, escape-the-frost and bitter-sweet, fruit wrapped around a stubborn pit. Living feels like sun and shadow and windswept chaos, grace and worms and the promise of a cherry pie.

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Living

looks like fragility,

petalled purity

daring to open.

Living

smells like hope,

tenuous aroma

wafting on brittle breeze.

Living

tastes like cherries,

sun-ripened,

escape-the-frost

and bitter-sweet,

fruit wrapped

around a stubborn pit.

Living

feels like

sun and shadow

and windswept chaos,

grace and worms

and the promise

of a cherry pie.

Responses to “Living”

  1. Caddo-Jael

    WOW again–this is full and rich. For some reason I like “windswept chaos”, especially. (Maybe because I just lived a week of it–ho hum.)

    1. melodylowes

      You, too?? Life is so full, with good and bad and lovely and ugly and everything in between – I am discouraged tonight with worms in my lilies and a risk of frost overnight – great gravy and 9/10ths, does it ALL have to be uphill work? 😦 Ah, well – it takes faith to hold on to the right kinds of things, and accept the bad along with the good. Hard lessons all around…

      1. Caddo-Jael

        Oh dear, you sound nearly like me this past week. Worms in lilies–now there’s a symbolic poem in the making. But frost again?? Great gravy is right.

      2. melodylowes

        Frost-free so far – but not damage free. My neighbours lost their 23-yr old son in a tragic accident this weekend. our hearts just ache for them…

      3. Caddo-Jael

        Oh I am SO sorry–what a terrible tragedy. I’ll be lifting all of you up in prayer, Mel–promise.

  2. Debbie

    You are on a roll, Melody. This was superb! Thank you for feeding me tonight!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks, Deb. I think you’ve fed me more than the other way around! Another young man in our small community was killed last night, and we have spent a day in tears trying to console some broken hearts…

  3. Heidi Viars

    reminds me of the book of Ecclesiastes … while at times it seems meaningless, all is well that ends well! and we know the end … don’t we? … love coming here with my cup of coffee and thoughts toward heaven … blessings, sister!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Heidi! God bless the coffee plantations! 😀

  4. ljlenehan

    Brilliant…

    1. melodylowes

      Wow – I’ll take it! 😀

  5. Glenda Mills

    ah yes, love this…especially the promise of a cherry pie! Thanks for continuing to wax strong in your writing!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Glenda!

  6. Gallivanta

    Grace and worms and the promise of a cherry pie 🙂 And sometimes the pie comes with the worm and the pit, if one is a careless cook but they only add to the flavour! Actually when one makes a cherry clafouti, the recipes always call for cherries with their pits still in because that is apparently the best way to get the full flavour of the cherry. The good with the bad, eh!

    1. melodylowes

      Absolutely! I should get that recipe – my cherries are notoriously hard to pit. And the way they are blooming out there, I have a lot of future pits to deal with! Yay!

      1. Gallivanta

        The only problem is that one has to balance the taste of the pits against the possible cost of a broken tooth!

      2. melodylowes

        🙂 And the dentist bill! OUCH! ;(

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