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Between the Lines

It’s true. Lines are more prominent than they used to be. But if you will read between . them, you will enter my world – dreams and ever afters, knights and clashes with wicked . tyrants, notes stashed in bottles and tossed on foreign shores. Between these lines lies a . spirit-essence, a will, a…

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It’s true. Lines are

more prominent than

they used to be. But if

you will read between

.

them, you will enter

my world – dreams

and ever afters, knights

and clashes with wicked

.

tyrants, notes stashed

in bottles and tossed on

foreign shores. Between

these lines lies a

.

spirit-essence, a will,

a mind, a heart. Turn

the pages breathlessly

when suspense leaves

.

you hanging; linger long

where hope casts her

spell. Decode the jots,

decipher the plot

.

sketched out by

an author yet

unknown. Read me,

between the lines.

 

Responses to “Between the Lines”

  1. Revelations in Writing

    Love this! 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Shannon! 🙂

  2. tiny lessons blog

    Beautiful! The lines are both lovable and useful! Loved it.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! 🙂

  3. lylekrahn

    I really liked this one. So many good phrases including “hope casts her spell.” But then I’ve always been partial to reading between the lines.

    1. melodylowes

      I can tell! Thanks, Lyle.

  4. I HAVE A VOICE

    that’s the best way to peruse the beautiful ~ between lines for, the spaces hold so much!

    1. melodylowes

      You are so right. Thank you!

  5. Pam

    love this photo as well as the line: decode the jots, decipher the plots…

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Pam! We are such complex critters – there is so much to get to know, under the surface…

  6. Seb

    This poem is worlds inside worlds…

    1. melodylowes

      I am honored, Seb! I’m glad that you can see inside, past the letters to a meaning of your own. Thanks for reading!

  7. Pieter Stok

    Great poem, great idea! Thank you.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you, Pieter!

  8. Rum Punch Drunk

    I really enjoyed reading this Melody. The more lines you have, the more you have seen and experienced. There are many pages to a book and much more to a person. I loved the line “turn the pages breathlessly when suspense leaves you hanging” it reminds me of all the things that are jotted down in our life diary from a young age, then when old age hits, we sit and glance at what had been from the past. Too late to make changes.
    Great post Melody.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks RPD! I like your take on aging – it fits so well with what I am experiencing and aim to experience. I LIKE the perspective that is coming with the grey hair… 🙂

  9. Gallivanta

    Intriguing. I tend to be fixated on the lines and forget to read between them. It’s a bit like charging along a highway and neglecting to see what is on either side. What a lot gets missed that way.

    1. melodylowes

      I know I have missed plenty, with my blinders on – or with an attitude that made it hard to truly see. I want to dig a little deeper!

      1. Gallivanta

        In digging you may find gold or diamonds 🙂

      2. melodylowes

        I think I already am… 😉

  10. godspoetbychoice

    Bravo! Loved the line linger long where hope casts her spell

    1. melodylowes

      That seems to be the favourite – thank you! 🙂

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