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Hold Your Breath

  Hold your breath, you mortals dressed in borrowed skin; this flesh is none the wiser for all its pomp and frenzy, nor more permanent for all its sheer transparency. Tread lightly on this hallowed sphere, ingest into gossamer lungs this gossamer oxygen (pale ribbons, bare hints of spectral wares weaving life to living) which…

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Hold your breath, you mortals

dressed in borrowed skin; this flesh

is none the wiser for all

its pomp and frenzy, nor more

permanent for all its sheer

transparency. Tread lightly

on this hallowed sphere, ingest

into gossamer lungs this

gossamer oxygen (pale

ribbons, bare hints of spectral

wares weaving life to living)

which seeks to wrap the broken

things with something less broken.

Dare you raise your head into

heaven? Walk in sandaled feet

where bushes quiver with flame?

Romanced, death may yet conquer

all – unless we marry Love

to Chaos, Grace to Weakness;

in that thread of hope-light, flesh

may yet walk in dignity,

skin wrap bare bones in pupal

cases which crackle with life.

Responses to “Hold Your Breath”

  1. bennetta faire

    Wow, wow, wow–the phrases here!

    1. melodylowes

      Strong emotion involved – this piece is very different than my usual, I ‘felt’ it very deeply. I’m glad it came across well. Thank you…

  2. Pam

    I agree with bennetta – Wow, wow, wow!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Pam! I was writing under a strong emotional impulse – that seems to be the trick, somehow…

  3. Kathleen’s Writings

    I love this!!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Kathleen!

  4. I HAVE A VOICE

    friend ~ a living breathing doctrine !

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Thanks Deb!

  5. Heidi Viars

    WOW is right … powerful …. actually had to read it twice 🙂 Beautiful, Melody!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Heidi!

  6. Symanntha Renn

    This one is especially powerful.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Symanntha! How is your fall going so far?

      1. Symanntha Renn

        Good so far!

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