She cradles her weakness deep, tenderly touching places that crisply curl past their prime; she treasures bent blooms, broken foliage. When petals lose their sheen, her soul stirs, shouting joy in exuberant notes, song of the ancients who learned secrets from secret sorrows. To such spirits as hers, pain is welcomed as Mentor, friend…

mallow star

 

She cradles her weakness deep,

tenderly touching places

that crisply curl past their prime;

she treasures bent blooms, broken

foliage. When petals lose

their sheen, her soul stirs, shouting

joy in exuberant notes,

song of the ancients who learned

secrets from secret sorrows.

To such spirits as hers, pain

is welcomed as Mentor, friend

whose sage presence sears blossoms

but harvests seeds. Thankful

heart, this, whose troubles have stripped

away the peripheral,

baubles which blocked her brilliance,

kept her from being a star.

 

 

Responses to “The Star Inside”

  1. RoSy

    LOVE the image. It’s somewhat hypnotizing. I can’t stop staring into it!

    1. melodylowes

      You are getting sleeeeeepy… 😉

  2. Heidi Viars

    I had to take a second look … ooohhhh … so pretty …. I think I am getting sleepy, too 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      hehe It’s amazing what you can find when you look for unusual things. I love the surprise of the looking – like a grand game of Hide and Seek! 🙂

  3. snappy~speak photo

    Very lovely. Beautiful image!
    ~Christy

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you Christy! IT’s a lot of fun to find surprises in the world around us, isn’t it?

  4. russtowne

    It is indeed a beautiful photo, yet in my judgment it is completely eclipsed by the magnificence of this piece from truly masterful poet. I am in awe of your talent, Melody.
    Russ

    1. melodylowes

      Wow. I am so honoured, Russ. Really.

  5. bennetta faire

    So much wisdom–truly there are secrets to be learned within secret sorrows, if we have courage, and ears to hear and eyes to see. Gorgeous photo and I’m sleepy too, but it’s for another reason–if you have time, read my “Praying for Tyler”.

    1. melodylowes

      Will do!

  6. Gallivanta

    Oh, you are clever to see the star within. ‘Glory Eyes’ again.

    1. melodylowes

      Yep! Upgraded eyelashes and everything! 😉

      1. Gallivanta

        Do your little students know you have ‘Glory Eyes”? I bet they know already that you have eyes in the back of your head!!!!!

      2. melodylowes

        *shriek* I haven’t told them that yet – I forgot! Wait til Monday….

      3. Gallivanta

        🙂

  7. I HAVE A VOICE

    yes, that inner eye that sees beyond the varnish is one thousand more powerful than 20/20.

    1. melodylowes

      Again, something YOU know about, with the roads you’ve walked.

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