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The Loom

  With shuddering of shuttle, the warp meets the weft – Autumn’s art in sunset tapestry. . Rhythmic cycle weaves copper to crimson, scarlet to gold, pattern passed down from ancient . hands. Loose threads are expertly battened, strung between starry- crisp nights and harvest-filled days . building texture as leaves (and cloth) are shed,…

sunset Sask Landing

 

With shuddering of shuttle,

the warp meets the weft – Autumn’s

art in sunset tapestry.

.

Rhythmic cycle weaves copper

to crimson, scarlet to gold,

pattern passed down from ancient

.

hands. Loose threads are expertly

battened, strung between starry-

crisp nights and harvest-filled days

.

building texture as leaves (and

cloth) are shed, Autumn’s nimble

fingers flying to keep up.

 

 

Responses to “The Loom”

  1. bennetta faire

    WOW-Wonderfully beautiful, Mel!!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks. I really like the whole 7 syllables per line thing – it seems to work so well for me.

  2. Gallivanta

    Beautifully woven.

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Thanks Gallivanta. That’s what I was going for… hehe

  3. Heidi Viars

    You are gifted … and such a gift it is … love this one!!! let’s hang on as long as we can … until that last shred has vanished into the cold and leaves us looking back and forward 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Yes, let’s! It’s a beautiful time of year, if we let ourselves enter into it…

  4. Delft

    Beautiful! Thanks for sharing!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks for stopping by! 🙂

  5. Seyi sandra

    Pristinely beautiful! 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Ooh, nice! I’ll take it! 😉 Thanks Sandra…

  6. Sheryl @ Flowery Prose

    Beautifully rendered! 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Sheryl!

  7. I HAVE A VOICE

    warm to the voicing of every syllable like hot honey caressing my throat.

    1. melodylowes

      Where DO you get these? Poetry, my dear, pure poetry…

      1. I HAVE A VOICE

        You inspire it dear!

  8. Robert Rife

    Excellent word art here, Melody.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks! Oooh – word art! Me Likes!

      1. Robert Rife

        ; ^ )

  9. RoSy

    Beautiful image & words!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Rosy!

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