Dapple me dainty in cinnamon shade, Shade me autumnal in copper-brushed suede; Suede me secluded where peace wanders prime, Prime me persuaded, a stitch sewn in Time.
Dapple me dainty in cinnamon shade,
Shade me autumnal in copper-brushed suede;
Suede me secluded where peace wanders prime,
Prime me persuaded, a stitch sewn in Time.
Love the rhyme! 😀 Great selection of words too!
Thanks! This was definitely a fun one to write.
Fun one! Love the word-play 🙂
You have to get your fun in somehow! 🙂 Thanks, Daisy…
Very clever, Melody!
Thanks Rob! 🙂
Lovely loop poem!
Thanks! These ones are always fun and challenging and fulfilling to write… Have a great weekend!
I love the flow of this poem Melody, very nice. 🙂
Thanks Dominic! 🙂
You really go the words dancing on this one.
Thanks Lyle! This one was fun. I appreciate the feedback!
Lovely!
Thanks Holly!
A fun rhyme of time.
I like this a lot!
🙂
Thanks Rosy. 😉 You guys sure help encourage creativity!!
A minute wrinkle in time! Fabulous wordplay ! Faithfully Debbie
Thanks Debbie! That’s when it gets fun, when you get to play… 😉
Ahhh, just what I needed this afternoon–a restful sundial poem, and it’s a Wow-Wonderful 5-Star one, Mel. Thank you, thank you–and God bless you BIG (it’s Friday!!)–love, Caddo
Friday it is! 😀 (Excuse my joy-dance, will you?) Thanks so much, Caddo-friend…
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