Thoughts On a Sundial Oct4 by melodylowes Dapple me dainty in cinnamon shade, Shade me autumnal in copper-brushed suede; Suede me secluded where peace wanders prime, Prime me persuaded, a stitch sewn in Time. Share this:FacebookEmailPinterestTwitterLinkedInTumblrLike this:Like Loading... Related
Love the rhyme! π Great selection of words too!
Thanks! This was definitely a fun one to write.
Fun one! Love the word-play π
You have to get your fun in somehow! π Thanks, Daisy…
Very clever, Melody!
Thanks Rob! π
Lovely loop poem!
Thanks! These ones are always fun and challenging and fulfilling to write… Have a great weekend!
I love the flow of this poem Melody, very nice. π
Thanks Dominic! π
You really go the words dancing on this one.
Thanks Lyle! This one was fun. I appreciate the feedback!
Lovely!
Thanks Holly!
A fun rhyme of time.
I like this a lot!
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Thanks Rosy. π You guys sure help encourage creativity!!
A minute wrinkle in time! Fabulous wordplay ! Faithfully Debbie
Thanks Debbie! That’s when it gets fun, when you get to play… π
Ahhh, just what I needed this afternoon–a restful sundial poem, and it’s a Wow-Wonderful 5-Star one, Mel. Thank you, thank you–and God bless you BIG (it’s Friday!!)–love, Caddo
Friday it is! π (Excuse my joy-dance, will you?) Thanks so much, Caddo-friend…