Thoughts On a Sundial

sundial shaded


Dapple me dainty in cinnamon shade,

Shade me autumnal in copper-brushed suede;

Suede me secluded where peace wanders prime,

Prime me persuaded, a stitch sewn in Time.


20 comments on “Thoughts On a Sundial

  1. Love the rhyme! 😀 Great selection of words too!

  2. adaisygarden says:

    Fun one! Love the word-play 🙂

  3. I love the flow of this poem Melody, very nice. 🙂

  4. Lyle Krahn says:

    You really go the words dancing on this one.

  5. RoSy says:

    A fun rhyme of time.
    I like this a lot!

  6. A minute wrinkle in time! Fabulous wordplay ! Faithfully Debbie

  7. Caddo says:

    Ahhh, just what I needed this afternoon–a restful sundial poem, and it’s a Wow-Wonderful 5-Star one, Mel. Thank you, thank you–and God bless you BIG (it’s Friday!!)–love, Caddo

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