Upon This Rock

  Upon this rock I take my stand, I shall not stand alone; I feel a strength beneath my feet, A strength that’s not my own. I feel a coolness in its shade, A balm for flitting breast; I feel the pulse of holy heat, A place to sit and rest. . Upon this rock…

leaf on rock

 

Upon this rock I take my stand,

I shall not stand alone;

I feel a strength beneath my feet,

A strength that’s not my own.

I feel a coolness in its shade,

A balm for flitting breast;

I feel the pulse of holy heat,

A place to sit and rest.

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Upon this rock I build my life,

I shall not build in vain;

It anchors me to solid ground,

And lifts me up again.

A sure foundation, set in stone,

An anchor for life’s seas –

So blow and bluster, autumn wind,

You shall not conquer me.

 

 

 

 

 

Responses to “Upon This Rock”

  1. russtowne

    As I read it, a smile started to build on my face, and the more I read, the bigger my smile became. Thank you, Melody.
    Russ

    1. melodylowes

      😀 (That’s me smiling with you…)

  2. Gallivanta

    Sounds like this was written just for me 🙂 Rock and solid ground are much more satisfactory than slough!

    1. melodylowes

      HA! I wonder if that idea was somehow percolating as I wrote? Se, you’re good for me. My NZ muse!

      1. Gallivanta

        Mmmmm, maybe it was 🙂 Happy to be a muse, any time. I can be amusing too, sometimes.

      2. melodylowes

        😉 *giggle* Let the comedy fly!

  3. Lyle Krahn

    There’s a lot of strength in that rock.

    1. melodylowes

      Absolutely! Thanks Lyle!

  4. Robert Alan Rife

    This is a hymn lyric if ever there was one. Nice!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Rob! I’m getting my music back, perhaps. I used to write and perform in our church – not for several years. Life kicked the music right out of me for a bit. But – poetry is closely linked to music, so I hope and pray that this one last piece to my healing puzzle will fall back into place one day.

      1. Robert Alan Rife

        Indeed. Poetry is the music of words.

  5. littlebtomato

    WOW! What an uplifting, encouraging and strengthening poem! “You shall not conquer me” And I agree with the comment about it being a hymn. Yes!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks so much! 🙂

  6. Caddo

    Ohhh 5-Star WOW-Wonderful, Mel!! I was thinkin’ ’bout you last night–how’s school goin’? God bless you BIG–love, sis Caddo

    1. melodylowes

      Busy! I just got back from an education conference and met one of my favourite Canadian children’s book illustrators. I came home all fired up with a terrific idea for a children’s book! I’m PUMPED!

      1. Caddo

        Good for you Mel–I’m thrilled for, pumped with you!!

      2. melodylowes

        Might run some of my ideas past your eye – it’s a rhyming text, so will be right up your alley. E-mail still the same??

      3. Caddo

        I think so. Catch me before Wed, though.

  7. Heidi Viars

    What an amazing reminder to put our trust in the Rock who cannot be moved 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      The only place I like to be caught standing around! 🙂

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