Once, When Looking Up

I see You there, covering me – a cathedral ceiling of finespun gold, aspen-boughs crowning my way with glory. . I hear You in the whisper, silent assignations passed from one trembling yellow throat to another, gentle sighs. . I feel Your gaze rocking me sweet, and I breathe, slow and deep, pause mid-stride to…

yellow aspen

I see You there, covering

me – a cathedral ceiling

of finespun gold, aspen-boughs

crowning my way with glory.

.

I hear You in the whisper,

silent assignations passed

from one trembling yellow throat

to another, gentle sighs.

.

I feel Your gaze rocking me sweet,

and I breathe, slow and deep, pause

mid-stride to rest in dappled

acceptance, cherished by shade.

.

You are here. You, Your essence,

Your presence – it sings, sunshine

in shadow, gold filigree

on an altar made of wood.

.

Splintered, I crack open. Your

notes rustle in my veins, seep

past knots, and I’m rooted here,

utterly, completely me.

Responses to “Once, When Looking Up”

  1. Robert Alan Rife

    Ooh, good one, Melody. Very nice.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks, Rob. You always seem to find the ones that pulled harder at my heart-strings… How’s west coast living these days?

      1. Robert Alan Rife

        The deepest, interior works are always those hard fought and won. We have to “Jacob” them out of ourselves. Life’s good here. Fall is upon us in all its glory and, like you, I’m seeking to capture every ounce of it in words.

      2. melodylowes

        Wow – ‘Jacob’ it out – I’m pretty sure there are rich things to mine out of that phrase….

      3. Robert Alan Rife

        We’re poets. Every phrase is the seedbed of more.

      4. melodylowes

        Preachin’ to the choir, there….isn’t that the truth??

      5. Robert Alan Rife

        ; ^ )

  2. Gallivanta

    Lovely.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you!

  3. Kathleen’s Writings

    very very beautiful!! I can smell the autumn while reading!! 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Kathleen!

  4. I HAVE A VOICE

    Ever felt you are wearing another kind of flesh while in that gushing glory!?

    1. melodylowes

      You know, I think I have! Being almost transported in a worshipful experience can do that…

  5. knittingwithheart

    Good for the soul ❤

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you!!

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